Tuesday, September 11, 2012
waiwera pools
On Sunday I went to Waiwera with my dad and my rugby team. It was fun we went on the slide it was called the speed slide it was fast .Then I went for lunch with my team we had a sausage sizzle. Then we went to go sit down on the wall and watch people go down the speed slide. There were people going down and some people did big bombs and some water went on my food. I waited for hour and a half. It was a long time but I still waited with my friend. After we wait we went to the movie pool it was too hot. We watched a movie in the pool. Then we went home. It was fun.
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3 comments:
Hi Logan,
cool story. It sounded like you had fun with your dad and your rugby team. Maybe you just need to not make one big paragraph and split them in two or three paragraph.
By Aldora.
Hello Logan I read your amazing story about going to Waiwera with your Dad I bet you had a great time with your Dad over there wow did you go on a slide cool I wish I went too.
Hi Logan,
Cool Story It Sounds Great But I Do Think That You Could Go Back And Edit It Cause There Are A Few Mistakes In There But The Rest Is Great
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